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Hold The Bells by ~hannahcore:iconhannahcore:

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If I die I did not die in vain
If I die I did not die in pain
If I die do not feel my hurt
If I die do not be scared to lie me in dirt

Remember my name as tears well your eyes
Remeber not to be afraid while you sit there and cry

If I did die I ask you not to scream
If I did die remember it's just I feel alone

My eyes are red and my throat is raw
My heart is broken and you're in awe
And as my eyes roll back into my head
Remember me as the star I used to dream of
Take a look at the night sky
Remind yourself why I wished to die
Don't say you wish you could of done more
It's not your fault
I tell you now
It's not your fault

I'm sorry if I caused you pain
but please remember
I did not die in vain
©2004-2010 ~hannahcore
:iconhannahcore:

Author's Comments

Yeah..read it at my funeral

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~xFalkorLuckx Dec 2, 2004, 9:32:14 AM
see. thing is. sometimes....going away is the only way to fix anything. and im sorry hannah. evryone else will read this and think im saying its ok to kill yourself the second something gets bad. but i dont expect them to understand. because they dont know.

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"Just think of this and me, as just a few of many things, to lie around, to clutter up your shelves" Your Own Disaster ~by~ Taking Back Sunday
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~hannahcore Dec 2, 2004, 9:40:45 AM
..I know. x

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Hannahcore - Not Your Avarage Type Of Core.

No Lies Just Love
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~thegreatkid Dec 2, 2004, 10:59:00 AM
your bro is a great model once again :)
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~hannahcore Dec 2, 2004, 11:29:42 AM
ha he's a star he is :) x

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Hannahcore - Not Your Avarage Type Of Core.

No Lies Just Love
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~damia Dec 2, 2004, 2:46:15 PM
My eyes are red and my throat is raw
My heart is broken and you're in awe
And as my eyes roll back into my head
Remember me as the star I used to dream of


i love that part, can they consider this a suicide note?

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But if you really want to live,
why not try and
.Make Yourself.
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~chaoticdarkness Dec 2, 2004, 4:15:16 PM
very sad..but wonderfully wordedbut..I dont think it'd be fit for a send off..u're a great person..so pain is probably something u'd cause the least of..u probably have a great deal of admiration from many..many of which u may not be aware of..but..meh..enough of my babbling..great job..^_^

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Sometimes life's too short to think twice...
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~hannahcore Dec 3, 2004, 7:28:42 AM
oh man that's an awsome compliment, thank you. It means you lot if you like it I wasn't sure on it (as usual). Thank you though :) x

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Hannahcore - Not Your Avarage Type Of Core.

No Lies Just Love
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~hannahcore Dec 3, 2004, 7:30:47 AM
:) x

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Hannahcore - Not Your Avarage Type Of Core.

No Lies Just Love
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